Layoffin Posted August 26, 2017 Share Posted August 26, 2017 Hey Guys Let me introduce myself i am layoffin, and I am back with another great map! Check the photos here:- http://imgur.com/a/HnrbV to get the map contact me on discord! My Discord Tag: Layoffin#9724 or Pm me here or email me at: [email protected] Link to comment
Rudransh Posted August 27, 2017 Share Posted August 27, 2017 (edited) Well, thats not how a city looks like, i checked the images and i think i must tell you the faults. 1). You used one landmass, that too sea dock and tried to make a "small city" on it. 2). Buildings are coming on the roads 3). Buildings are collapsing with each other. 4). Correct Distribution of pathways is not provided. 5). Distribution of building is not correct. There is a house then a factory then a building. 6). There is a SeaRock but no water. 7). Lack of imagination. And most importantly, the city is all blocked and covered with "Dock Fence" type objects. Though you gave it a nice try, good luck. Edited August 27, 2017 by Rudransh Link to comment
hydrogenium Posted August 27, 2017 Share Posted August 27, 2017 (edited) Looks good at first glance, but as said above buildings cover roads. And to be honest, it seems like you placed only buildings and lamps, what makes the map boring. But you can simply improve it a lot by adding more elements and replacing some objects (village houses stand next to sky crapers lol) However, gl Edited August 27, 2017 by hydrogenium Link to comment
Layoffin Posted August 31, 2017 Author Share Posted August 31, 2017 On 8/27/2017 at 19:45, hydrogenium said: Looks good at first glance, but as said above buildings cover roads. And to be honest, it seems like you placed only buildings and lamps, what makes the map boring. But you can simply improve it a lot by adding more elements and replacing some objects (village houses stand next to sky crapers lol) However, gl On 8/27/2017 at 12:55, Rudransh said: Well, thats not how a city looks like, i checked the images and i think i must tell you the faults. 1). You used one landmass, that too sea dock and tried to make a "small city" on it. 2). Buildings are coming on the roads 3). Buildings are collapsing with each other. 4). Correct Distribution of pathways is not provided. 5). Distribution of building is not correct. There is a house then a factory then a building. 6). There is a SeaRock but no water. 7). Lack of imagination. And most importantly, the city is all blocked and covered with "Dock Fence" type objects. Though you gave it a nice try, good luck. Both of you thank you so much for pointing my mistake I will try to correct it!! Link to comment
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